What's this
What's this
i don't even know what this is it's just me making my fist beat on the akai pro mpk mini mk2.
It's good. I don't vote 5/5 because the end sounds weird to me. You have this filter and volume modulations that arrive very quickly and go down, and the last chord sounds like you don't "resolve" the musical phrase.
But the overhaul sounds pretty cool
The low pass was made intentionally; about the last chord, it's very low but you can hear a slow breakdown.
Thanks for telling :)
Le tout sonne plutôt bien, les paroles sont assez cool. Je m'attendais à une explosion musicale lors des refrains, et c'est ce pourquoi je n'ai pas mis la cinquième étoile.
Concernant le chant, c'est vraiment pas mal. On dirait juste que tu chantes du nez, peut-être une erreur de ma part. Mais si c'est le cas, essaie de faire sortir les sons de ta bouche, moins du nez.
For english speaker ...
The overhaul is pretty good, lyrics too. I was waiting for music explosion during the refrain, and that's the reason of voting 4/5..
About the singing, it's not bad. But it sounds like you sing from the nose, maybe a mistake from me. But if I'm right, try to make your voice to go out from your mouth, less from the nose.
Good job ;)
Merci -- contente de savoir que ca te plait. J'avoue que ma voix est plutot nasale, et c'est quelque chose que je veux eviter.
It's amazing. Good job
Thanks Earel! :D
Awesome ! You should find a singer, and it'll be perfect ;)
Thanks for listening! Definitely missing lyrics though, I'd love to collab with a vocalist one of these days and get some screams mixed in.
I just want to listen more ! ! Too short, but perfect
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
The melody is great. You develop it well. But ... The drums. In my opinion, they are not enough powerful.
And ... At 1:09 : I was waiting for a great explosion of the song. And it stay calm. The same at 1:59
Keep working, it's not bad at all :)
Hello,
Thanks for your review. Yeah, the structure of the song is mostly calm. I don't have much experience in orchestral music yet, but I'm working on it. The biggest issue I'm having right now is the whole composition is too quiet. Once I figure that out, I can put more power into the drums.
I love it !
Thanks!
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